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闪电般提高英语写作应试得分能力(模式篇三)
类型六:说明事物A的重要性
Importance of A
第一段(Importance of A)(首句说明A的重要性)Whatever ones does, one should do it with A.(扩展句1反证法)If one has no A, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced with...。 This truth seems to be self-evident.(扩展句2例证法)In reality, however, we do see a lot of people who always complain that they lack the... to do something or that their difficulties are too great to overcome. For some, this might be true. But for many others, this only shows that they...
第二段(Reasons for lack of A)(首句提出疑问)Why do some people often feel frustrated even though they are capable of doing something? I think there are two main reasons.(扩展句1原因1)In the first place, these people don`t have a correct estimate of themselves. For example...(扩展句2原因2)Secondly, there is another possibility that they exaggerate the difficulties. They can`t see...。They tend to...
第三段(Necessity to... A)(我的观点)In my opinion, one should... as long as he has a right attitude towards...。 We should neither underestimate nor overestimate our... As a proverb says" Where there is a will, there is a way." With... we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with.
笔者注:(1)此模式与类型四有相似之处,而模式在实际运用中可以交叉使用。所以细化模式将有助于考试中的合理套用。
(2)对于模式个人以为不用“倒背如流”,只要平时多看看--最好这20来个模式每天看2个熟悉就可。因为模式的概括性,交叉性,我们对于一个模式的某个句子记不清了,完全可以用其它模式中的相近句型替代。避免了全文背颂范围的局限性和死板性,以免考试时因某个句子的断层而使下文很难展开。(附注:这也就是我提到的狂背n篇具体范文的死板性。另考研作文基本回避热点话题,因此狂背范文的命中率极小。最后,范文的写作风格各异,背记太多范文也很难行成适用考试作文高分格式的个人风格。)
(3) As a proverb says" Where there is a will, there is a way." 等句未谚语句型的使用,也常成为阅卷老师眼中的亮点。平时注意此类句型对模式的充实。
附常用议论文模式:
As is known to all, it is important to be/do...。I think there are at least two reasons for...。For one thing... For another...。Let`s take... for example...。From what I have mentioned above we can see that without...we cannot...。It is clear that... plays an important part in...。
Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. Some people think that...。According to them,all of us should...。Others argue that...。In their opinion, nobody can... without...。Compared with..., ... has a lot of advantages over...。There is no doubt that...。As a consequence,...
In short, I firmly support the view that...。 It is because...。So my conclusion is that...。 I am sure that
my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
笔者注:模式最后一句可通用于文章末段表明自己观点的结束语句,是一句比较有用的“废话”。这类句子对于出现字数不足的情况时很有用处,在后面的模式中还有涉及
+ 还有,和,此外,而且,以及
- 减少, 不会,没有
= 等于, 相当于
> 大过,超过,优越于
< 少于,小于,比不上
↓ 减少,下降
↑ 增加,上升,上报
↗ 逐步增加
↘ 逐步下降,减少
→ 向前发展
∴ 所以, 于是
∵ 因为,由于
√ 正确, 同意,好
∽ 调换,对调,交流
ⅹ 错误,不行,没有
‖ 停止,停泻
□ 国家
⊙ 国内
□#8226; 国外
w world
! 注意,警惕
? 疑问,问题,试验性
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